"Where is the man I knew and my friends?" asked the man.
For he found himself on a beach and did not remember what had happened to him that night. He had a couple of bruises and scratches on his back. " If only I knew what happened last night," he asked himself. So he lay there in pain on the beach not knowing who he was nor why was he there.
Just then, a huge wave swept him in the ocean. He was so weak that he couldn't swim and drowned.
You tell a lot in this short short story. I find this form of story really hard. I can't get enough information in that short of space. Do you like it? Should I use it again?
ReplyDeleteReally creepy. What did happen to him? I want to know!
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